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[原创]微型诗:海、月亮、云、星星、雨

梁翼
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Posted: 2007-07-12 05:10:57 Post subject: [原创]微型诗:海、月亮、云、星星、雨

[原创]微型诗:海、月亮、云、星星、雨诗／梦君诗画两翼《海》敞开博大的胸脯满怀激情迎接百川来客《月亮》太阳的妻子羞答答半个脸蛋见人《云》天上的羊群追逐着梦想的绿洲《星星》白天暗恋别人黑夜目眸秋波生怕别人不知道《雨》雷公变脸风害怕呜呜抽泣２００７年７月１２日 _________________ 作品发表在:《诗词》报、《澳洲彩虹鹦》、《2006中国最佳网络诗歌》、《华语诗人2005-2006双年展目录》、《回归》、《中国现代诗歌网<秋之韵>诗赛二等奖》、《诗歌报世界杯诗赛三等奖》

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Posted: 2007-07-13 20:10:59 Post subject:

太阳的妻子羞答答半个脸蛋见人好感觉,好想法!

金金
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Posted: 2007-07-14 01:42:34 Post subject:

这组到一定程度了 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

梁翼
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Posted: 2007-07-14 21:30:13 Post subject:

桔子 wrote:

太阳的妻子

羞答答

半个脸蛋见人
好感觉,好想法!

多谢评阅.问好
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作品发表在:《诗词》报、《澳洲彩虹鹦》、《2006中国最佳网络诗歌》、《华语诗人2005-2006双年展目录》、《回归》、《中国现代诗歌网<秋之韵>诗赛二等奖》、《诗歌报世界杯诗赛三等奖》

梁翼
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Posted: 2007-07-14 21:31:02 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

这组到一定程度了

多谢鼓励,问好
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作品发表在:《诗词》报、《澳洲彩虹鹦》、《2006中国最佳网络诗歌》、《华语诗人2005-2006双年展目录》、《回归》、《中国现代诗歌网<秋之韵>诗赛二等奖》、《诗歌报世界杯诗赛三等奖》

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-07-15 05:11:38 Post subject:

不错的诗！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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