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五绝－风雪独钓

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-13 17:34:20 Post subject: 五绝－风雪独钓

苍茫江雪色，独钓在兰舟。抖落尘间事，无言皓洁留。

qxz-123456
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Posted: 2007-07-14 03:06:40 Post subject:

美景如画。欣赏，问好莹雪。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发）智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/

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Posted: 2007-07-14 06:15:07 Post subject:

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-14 19:41:46 Post subject:

qxz-123456 wrote:

美景如画。欣赏，问好莹雪
。

谢谢鼓励！问好qxz-123456

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-14 19:42:29 Post subject:

芯彤 wrote:

梦飞翁
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Posted: 2007-07-20 15:55:17 Post subject: 赞赏

好一首绝句！赞赏！ _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-07-20 16:59:47 Post subject:

有自洁出世之思,脱俗. "兰舟"的"兰"似乎换"楠"字较妥,请酌定.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2007-07-20 17:33:05 Post subject:

更正一下:"兰舟"的"兰",还是以"兰"为好,"楠木"虽可作舟,但不及木兰之香. 有蘇轼<<赤壁赋>>"桂棹兮兰浆"为证.

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-20 19:41:55 Post subject: Re: 赞赏

梦飞翁 wrote:

好一首绝句！赞赏！

问好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-20 19:44:32 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

更正一下:"兰舟"的"兰",还是以"兰"为好,"楠木"虽可作舟,但不及木兰之香.
有蘇轼<<赤壁赋>>"桂棹兮兰浆"为证.

呵呵，谢谢黄兄关注和注解！问好

晓松
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Posted: 2007-07-20 20:53:13 Post subject:

还记得当初黄洋界老师题的寒江独钓图吗？

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-20 22:13:52 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

还记得当初黄洋界老师题的寒江独钓图吗？

记得呀！

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-07-20 23:21:20 Post subject:

喜欢"抖落尘间事"句,洒脱!

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-07-21 19:31:53 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

喜欢"抖落尘间事"句,洒脱!

谢谢荷梦关注！

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