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暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-06-10 03:10:45 Post subject: 江城子．酒难醒

半边风雨半边晴，酒难醒，步休停。数朵浮云、齐个唤谁名？扶影过墙心未静，招手笑，问卿卿。人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。何奈苍天、苦海任吾行。欲待菩提明镜取，前世孽，今生应？ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-06-10 04:31:04 Post subject: Re: 江城子．酒难醒

暗香如沁 wrote:

半边风雨半边晴，酒难醒，步休停。
数朵浮云、齐个唤谁名？
扶影过墙心未静，招手笑，问卿卿。

人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。
何奈苍天、苦海任吾行。
欲待菩提明镜取，前世孽，今生应？

好词！只是读来有些伤感。
问好斑斑！

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Posted: 2007-06-11 00:38:37 Post subject:

一幕用寂寞谱曲的舞蹈虽然伤感，却也优雅问好，才女

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Posted: 2007-06-12 02:22:53 Post subject: Re: 江城子．酒难醒

冰清 wrote:

暗香如沁 wrote:

好词！只是读来有些伤感。
问好斑斑！

谢谢老师鼓励．
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Posted: 2007-06-12 02:24:16 Post subject:

urna风之度 wrote:

一幕用寂寞谱曲的舞蹈
虽然伤感，却也优雅
问好，才女

谢谢评阅．问好风．
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Posted: 2007-06-12 02:36:27 Post subject: Re: 江城子．酒难醒

暗香如沁 wrote:

好个“半边风雨半边晴，酒难醒，步休停。”“人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。”写的好，为版主鼓掌，学习了。

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Posted: 2007-06-12 03:47:44 Post subject:

谢谢大海兄评阅．鼓励． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-06-15 05:33:27 Post subject:

真好！ “扶影过墙心未静，招手笑，问卿卿”，醉态可掬。可一转笔，却 “人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。”，伶仃，酒冷后的审视。咳，让人也看了揪心。古来酒伴美人愁一饮桃红更无忧只怯醒来独对影凌乱空杯不忍收 _________________ 心灵之旅： http://www.samecityinfo.com/supersite/?23

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Posted: 2007-06-30 22:24:16 Post subject:

“人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。” 多才还多感，心到还手到。的为佳句。 _________________ 　　天　浪 http://blog.sina.com.cn/tlang

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Posted: 2007-07-12 21:49:03 Post subject:

枫华墨客 wrote:

真好！

“扶影过墙心未静，招手笑，问卿卿”，醉态可掬。

可一转笔，却
“人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。”，伶仃，酒冷后的审视。

咳，让人也看了揪心。

古来酒伴美人愁
一饮桃红更无忧
只怯醒来独对影
凌乱空杯不忍收

谢谢兄长评阅．
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Posted: 2007-07-12 21:49:54 Post subject:

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“人言醉后若娉婷，看分明，是伶仃。”

多才还多感，心到还手到。的为佳句。

谢谢评阅．
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Posted: 2007-07-13 08:04:13 Post subject:

上阕写醉意朦胧之态,简直是一幅美女醉酒图,下阕写醉后半醒心情之苦涩, 绘形写意,形神兼备,是一首好词.

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笑这么开心．呵呵．问好．
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Posted: 2007-07-15 16:09:30 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

上阕写醉意朦胧之态,简直是一幅美女醉酒图,下阕写醉后半醒心情之苦涩,
绘形写意,形神兼备,是一首好词.

谢谢老师鼓励问好．
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Posted: 2007-07-18 07:16:52 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-07-18 17:13:45 Post subject: Re: 江城子．酒难醒

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得宋风
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Posted: 2007-07-20 09:40:08 Post subject: Re: 江城子．酒难醒

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暗香如沁 wrote:

得宋风

谢评阅．
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Posted: 2007-07-20 09:40:33 Post subject:

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来学习

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