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狮子王
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PostPosted: 2007-07-08 08:36:15    Post subject: 狮子王 Reply with quote

狮子王
--世界杯观感


<狮子王>

跪地, 仰天
颓然飘落的长发
让我想起非洲丛林里傲慢的狮子
战败的瞬间

临门一脚
命运之神抛弃了你
时间, 在那一分钟停滞了
沮丧的王呵
你是否又一次穿过死亡的
极限?

<猎豹>

如同闪电
在草原旋起流线型的波涛
这速度和智慧的角逐
是在争夺九天神女的绣球么?
还是阿波罗的荣耀

<鱼>

跃起, 当你用身体
去抵御那强悍的不速之客
是否想过坠落
不在水中

<虎>

“虎视眈眈”
于我, 只不过一句成语
动物园的虎
温顺如猫
找不到 “眈眈”的感觉
今天, 我在你的眼中看到了
那是火与冰交融
冷酷, 灼热
我想, 这眼神对于你那些伤痕累累的兵
无疑是一针强心剂
… …
直到终场的哨音
唤醒你的人性

<鸽子>

有人说足球能转动地球
有人说, 这是没有硝烟的两国交战
绿色的草坪
一个象征圆满祥和的球体在滚动
在荧屏上, 在我心中

突然想到名模大赛
想到这个世界上的男人和女人
随手留下几行字句:
足球, 美在拼搏
那么服装?

其实, 哪个女儿没有父亲的侠肝义胆
哪个男儿没有母亲的热血柔肠
如果说流血, 血都是红的
如果说流泪, 泪都是咸的

是的, 必须承认
豹之疾, 虎之威
鱼之舍身于不顾, 狮子的
王者之风
窃取了我感动和泪水

切换一个频道
五彩缤纷的霓裳婀娜的走来
女人的柔韧

足球在旋转, 霓裳在旋转
千万只竞飞的鸽子腾空而起
我盼望着
这和平的使者
将永久的替代战争风云

<斑>

最后的博杀
视而不见
金杯举起狂欢

我想知道
一颗睿智, 夺目的头颅
在载入史册的一顶之后
如何
撞入别人的胸怀

近日, 青年世界杯足球赛在CANADA举行, 贴首旧作助兴.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-08 15:02:38    Post subject: Reply with quote



最后的博杀
视而不见
金杯举起狂欢

我想知道
一棵睿智, 夺目的头颅
在载入史册的一顶之后
如何
撞入别人的胸怀

欣赏!一颗----棵---打字误。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-08 17:07:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢提醒, 改了. 我常干这事 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 09:39:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

其实, 哪个女儿没有父亲的侠肝义胆
哪个男儿没有母亲的热血柔肠

could not agree more!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 17:32:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏好诗!!!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 18:05:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
其实, 哪个女儿没有父亲的侠肝义胆
哪个男儿没有母亲的热血柔肠

could not agree more!


谢谢你的同感 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 18:09:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
欣赏好诗!!!


这是首旧作, 几乎每一小节都是在球赛的间歇中写的. 他们笑我, 连越位都看不出来, 写的哪门子足球 Embarassed

我以为, 足球是一种精神 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 19:16:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

原来还是球迷呢。我从小踢到大(现在踢不动了),也从来没想过写点什么。
现在连看都不看了,中国踢得太臭,一群没大脑的。
但是去年旅欧,去米兰,阿森纳,切尔西,托特纳姆等主场参观了一番。


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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 21:38:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

好感受~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-10 09:13:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢你的照片,怎么NOBODY呢? 好羡慕你到此一游 Very Happy

nobody wrote:
原来还是球迷呢。我从小踢到大(现在踢不动了),也从来没想过写点什么。
现在连看都不看了,中国踢得太臭,一群没大脑的。
但是去年旅欧,去米兰,阿森纳,切尔西,托特纳姆等主场参观了一番。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-10 09:14:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
好感受~ Very Happy


问好月亮 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-10 09:17:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:


最后的博杀
视而不见
金杯举起狂欢

我想知道
一棵睿智, 夺目的头颅
在载入史册的一顶之后
如何
撞入别人的胸怀

欣赏!一颗----棵---打字误。


哈, 今天是这惊世一顶的纪念日, 想起来就乐, 好可爱的齐大内 Very Happy Very Happy

有人说他俩应该手拉手去喝一杯.
cheers
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PostPosted: 2007-07-10 20:20:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
杨海军 wrote:
欣赏好诗!!!


这是首旧作, 几乎每一小节都是在球赛的间歇中写的. 他们笑我, 连越位都看不出来, 写的哪门子足球 Embarassed

我以为, 足球是一种精神 Very Happy


对,一种叶公好龙的精神! Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-07-11 08:53:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈, 让你发现了. 那天我们BBQ, 大家在草坪上踢足球, 球一到我跟前我就抱头逃跑. 后来大家只好给我换防, 以备我们的足球不至于滚到湖里去 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-07-13 06:23:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

感悟的瞬間~~贊!
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PostPosted: 2007-07-14 00:26:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

原来是写足球的,我也喜欢足球
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