William Zhou周道模
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 Posted: 2007-07-06 19:29:34 Post subject: Flowers |
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Flowers
I am the life broke its limb
The flowers broke twigs come to see me
I am the cities away from dirt
The flowers away from dirt against my fatuity
I am the fate growing old
The anile flowers accompany my death
I am the reborn earth
The newborn flowers run to the hope on hills
I am the renascent emotions
The rensacent flowers unfold Spring thought
花
我是断肢的生活
断枝的花忍痛把我探望
我是离土的城市
离土的花泪倚我的荒唐
我是衰老的命运
衰老的花陪伴我的死亡
我是再生的大地
再生的花啊跑出山野的希望
我是复活的激情
复活的花啊海啸春天的思想
2005.4.22傍晚草
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William Zhou周道模
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这一首是先汉语后翻译成英语的，请师友们继续批评，先谢了！
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| Posted: 2007-07-07 05:23:19 Post subject: |
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| 英文还可以修改~~ |
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我改了一遍，请 kino 和其他师友们继续批评。
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