东北诗弦
童生
Joined: 05 Jun 2007
Posts: 73
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 Posted: 2007-07-05 03:46:48 Post subject: 传纸条 |
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发条人满脸笑靥
抬手轻触旁边的同学，低声：
“把它传过去，拜托！”
（纸条已具名）
紧接，另一个同学轻触
又一个同学侧身
接着又传出，如此
若干个近乎同样的动作
（因为隔行，很繁琐）
最后，传到一个人的手中
停住，低首，轻轻展开
然后侧身，给发条人
一点甜甜的笑意
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但觉高歌有鬼神，焉知饿死填沟壑？ |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-07-05 19:55:16 Post subject: |
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生动, AND SWEET  |
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nobody
进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2007-07-05 21:18:54 Post subject: |
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缺少点诗的感觉。
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I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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金金
进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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杨海军
进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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