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早茶

萨福
童生

Joined: 07 Oct 2006
Posts: 32

萨福Collection

Posted: 2006-10-08 21:30:11 Post subject: 早茶

阳光还未到达习惯一杯早茶听水音看叶子旋舞凌乱的步子没有和音乐节拍透明的眼波,缓缓流露雨前心事于是，我的裙裾开始从夜的深处飘起来飘起来

和平岛
举人

Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 1277
Location: Victoria, Canada
和平岛Collection

Posted: 2006-10-08 23:37:55 Post subject:

我的裙裾开始从夜的深处飘起来 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2006-10-09 18:35:50 Post subject:

阳光还未到达习惯一杯早茶听水音看叶子旋舞。。。。。。投入的。

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2006-10-21 04:00:16 Post subject:

最后一节好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

左岸
秀才

Joined: 12 Oct 2006
Posts: 215
Location: 中国大连
左岸Collection

Posted: 2006-10-23 20:57:48 Post subject:

凌乱的步子没有和音乐节拍透明的眼波,缓缓流露雨前心事感觉静中有动，它的外围与背景的清哳，将支持这种意识流。 _________________ 黑暗怎样焊住灵魂的银河

维鹿延
秀才

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 212
Location: 中国广东
维鹿延Collection

Posted: 2006-10-24 09:18:17 Post subject:

款款而来，亭亭玉立。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2006-10-24 14:47:18 Post subject:

看叶子旋舞着裙裾浮想联翩

萨福
童生

Joined: 07 Oct 2006
Posts: 32

萨福Collection

Posted: 2006-10-25 21:59:01 Post subject:

非常高兴看到大家的回贴。谢谢，谢谢各位！

鹤雨
秀才

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 113
Location: 上海
鹤雨Collection

Posted: 2006-11-03 03:26:26 Post subject: 轻柔的一个，很美！

问好！ _________________ 愿意和大家共同进步!

墨染红颜
童生

Joined: 08 Oct 2006
Posts: 69

墨染红颜Collection

Posted: 2006-11-05 04:12:37 Post subject:

一幅画在诗里：） _________________ 风花飞有态，烟絮坠无痕。

萨福
童生

Joined: 07 Oct 2006
Posts: 32

萨福Collection

Posted: 2006-11-07 04:55:21 Post subject:

再次谢谢各位老师.

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