blackhorse
童生
Joined: 20 May 2007
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 Posted: 2007-07-05 22:59:12 Post subject: 虚构 |
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虚构
盛夏的雨本应滂沱
却如丝似缕悱恻缠绵
柏油路边的西瓜纹路清晰
田野旁的柳树蓬头垢面
一只已不年轻的手伸向风中
探询着空气的温度
维纳斯必须断臂
绛珠草难再呜咽
滔滔的瀑声湮没了高山流水
还有谁能静下心思演绎风求凰?
风就是风
马就是马
牛就是牛
南瓜是南瓜
车还是车
南瓜不可能变马车
却处处演绎着荒唐的童话
于是时间便开始了放荡
肆意地
虚构
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白水
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-07-06 15:04:39 Post subject: |
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于是便开始了
肆意地
虚构
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-07-06 15:19:37 Post subject: |
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支持：
讨厌无病呻吟
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博弈
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Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
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| Posted: 2007-07-06 21:07:36 Post subject: |
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那首诗不虚构？却还要实。
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blackhorse
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| Posted: 2007-07-10 01:53:57 Post subject: 感谢 |
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各位老师
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