弹剑作歌
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 Posted: 2007-07-04 16:43:25 Post subject: 苏幕遮 |
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奈何天，离恨处，春水携花，又向东流去。野渡孤舟荒草路，老柳无依，拂乱丝丝雨。
暗香沉，冥色舞，江上舟摇，盼得仙人顾。一夕风流知更若，梦醒时分，两耳吴侬语。 |
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野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: toronto
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| Posted: 2007-07-04 16:46:25 Post subject: |
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浑成圆润，好。
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-07-04 18:23:00 Post subject: |
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| 楼主的确好文笔 |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2007-07-04 21:10:55 Post subject: |
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弹剑兄多日不见，很多朋友都惦记。
不过野航很理解：弹剑作歌苦，听云戴玨钟。呵呵！ |
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弹剑作歌
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2007-07-08 03:29:00 Post subject: |
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谬赞了。 |
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弹剑作歌
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2007-07-08 03:30:08 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 楼主的确好文笔 |
问好白水兄。 |
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弹剑作歌
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
Posts: 68
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| Posted: 2007-07-08 03:34:04 Post subject: |
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| 晓松 wrote: |
弹剑兄多日不见，很多朋友都惦记。
不过野航很理解：弹剑作歌苦，听云戴玨钟。呵呵！ |
谢谢晓松及朋友们惦记。弹剑近来一直太忙，没时间上网，这里谢罪了。 |
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