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添色(想象诗)
孔小虎
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 04:22:11    Post subject: 添色(想象诗) Reply with quote

添色(想象诗)

孔小虎

天安门的门顶
悬挂着
庄严的国徽

头戴钢盔身背钢枪的军人
手拎一桶朱漆
高高地立在木梯上
正在为伟大的作品添色
一丝不苟的涂抹
倾注了军人
全部的生命
鲜红色
填补了五角星四周的空白
军人的力与美
在此展露无遗

添上的仅仅是鲜红色吗
不!还有军人特有的草绿色
添上的仅仅是草绿色吗
不!还有军人完整的血肉之躯
添上的果真是朱漆吗
不!那是军人的青春热血
是地地道道从军人血管里
一点一滴地
流出的



这血
曾汇成红色的生命之河
浇灌过曾经惨遭蹂躏的中华林
让他日益茁壮成长并生机勃勃
高大的中华树
添了一圈又一圈年轮

这血
曾染红过雨花石
留下烈士挥洒热血的烙印
告诉后代一个个
可歌可泣的感人故事

这血
曾注入救国救民的针筒
流入曾经即将干涸的母亲之河
让祖国母亲获得第二次生命
捍卫了她不可侵犯的尊严

首都上空
永久徘徊正义的回音
祖国母亲的心脏
鲜红而充满活力

天安门的门顶
悬挂着
庄严、鲜红的国徽
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 22:51:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

可以再深入些
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PostPosted: 2007-07-01 23:23:04    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

谢谢你的指点
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PostPosted: 2007-07-25 00:28:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 20:55:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-08-13 21:20:32    Post subject: lai Reply with quote

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