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城中季节(练习写带韵的)

kino
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Posted: 2007-06-28 19:25:34 Post subject: 城中季节(练习写带韵的)

城中季节春我踯躅在楼宇夹巷寻觅着绵绵的雨丝和结着愁怨的丁香远远的那一抹粉红是散落尘泥的桃娘有花无实的绚烂是不是一种无尽的苍凉？夏我在悬空的斗室躲藏梦里盼着无花果紫透卷角的课本丢在一旁去看燕子从湖面低飞网乱飞的蜻蜓和夕阳把盛夏晚雨回味并不悠长，却充满沧桑秋去西山看银杏叶黄权当作遍野的稻黍和你那江南的僻壤你在天桥上看车流不似谷挑来来往往你若问我为何惆怅？我只说未听见秋蝉的声响冬你早起去收地上的霜我说你不如回到梦乡雪花是城中的过客阿来去都是如此的匆忙你说这里是人的天堂冬暖夏凉我却整日里把那故乡怀想

白水
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Posted: 2007-06-28 19:29:33 Post subject:

这韵用的真不错

金金
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Posted: 2007-06-30 04:53:39 Post subject:

好诗当提起来` _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-06-30 15:46:04 Post subject:

再提一下！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

kino
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Posted: 2007-07-01 20:27:24 Post subject:

问好楼上各位，学着写点东西，谢谢支持。

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