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月亮与浮云

刺桐飞花
童生

Joined: 29 Jun 2007
Posts: 19
Location: 中国福建泉州
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Posted: 2007-06-29 18:02:48 Post subject: 月亮与浮云

月亮与浮云 ★刺桐飞花月色真撩人。撞见你犹如撞见姑娘的怀你在那边顾盼，我在这里微语月亮是姑娘上辈子的眸嫦娥在左，玉兔在右一家姐妹和和睦睦姑娘高卧于天上我是她身旁羞隐的那片云风来雨去，小心护翼千百年来我们产生了爱情浮云与月亮，我与姑娘天上地下，生死相依 2007年6月29日 _________________ BLOG：http://blog.sina.com.cn/cwq QQ：303021000

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2007-06-29 21:53:55 Post subject:

内心情感的抒发.

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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Posted: 2007-06-30 15:50:54 Post subject:

有意思，舒服的小诗。问好！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

鲁齐
秀才

Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 101
Location: 中国山东
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Posted: 2007-06-30 17:29:32 Post subject:

不错的情感抒怀. _________________ 诗歌是一面旗帜!

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2007-07-01 04:03:23 Post subject:

情景相映

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