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今夜，旧病裂开了口子
荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-06-22 23:54:56    Post subject: 今夜，旧病裂开了口子 Reply with quote
今夜的遥控器,错调了频道
旧病裂开口子
点滴夜雨,姗姗地来
悄悄地去

对那场病,我一直欲说还休
多久了,我不再谈季节
不写花,不写月
还有风和雪

我只谈白天
说说洗衣,做饭,工作
我只写黑夜
写写此刻屋外的车鸣,犬吠
以及，耳畔的钟声滴答
然后,熄灯，闭眼 ，睡觉……

应该强调的是：我不做梦
旧病很旧
明天是新的
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 02:45:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
旧病很旧
明天是新的......出彩的结尾.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 06:14:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
旧病很旧
明天是新的

好心态
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 19:21:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
不谈风花雪月

问好梦荷~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 05:54:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
赵福治 wrote:
旧病很旧
明天是新的......出彩的结尾.

谢谢!
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 05:55:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
旧病很旧
明天是新的

好心态

呵呵，也不是什么心态好歹，如果人要活着的话。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 05:56:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
不谈风花雪月

问好梦荷~ Smile

是啊，不谈那些。问好明月！
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