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城市系列之三:梧桐树与城市同谋
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PostPosted: 2007-06-29 17:33:20    Post subject: 城市系列之三:梧桐树与城市同谋 Reply with quote

城市系列之三:

梧桐树与城市同谋

冰淇淋退不去
城市额头的热度
屋檐下的门锁
禁不住红杏出墙的偷情
花朵替代城市软弱无力
宠物们游行集会
一起进入发情期

月亮的残缺是幸福的开始
夏天的背面还是夏天
墨镜背后却暗藏一双阴谋
邮筒昼夜消化不老的情

欲望在城市内疯长
不能节制就是死亡
微醉的霓虹灯失去理性
梧桐树与城市同谋
路上汽车喇叭
突然集体失声
躁动的引擎
熄不掉的一股股怒气

风铃叮叮当当的日子
郁闷能否随风散去
城市脱去睡衣入梦
被头顶上的飞机惊醒
鸽子噗哧着翅膀
城市能否真正飞翔?


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三色堇
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PostPosted: 2007-06-29 17:50:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

如果能有跳跃的空间就更好了
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 04:56:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言上的特色很好
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PostPosted: 2007-06-30 15:43:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好东兵诗人!!
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