王君明
秀才
Joined: 03 Apr 2007
Posts: 250
Location: 甘肃天水
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 Posted: 2007-06-25 19:18:18 Post subject: 老鼠 |
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黑夜明眸闪寸光，几番出进抖轻狂。
排场足下红丝毯，粉面灯前翠幔床。
得道揩油堪倚老，摇头嚼字忒端庄。
荣华满眼无多恨，鼠辈群居旖旎乡。
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-06-26 08:34:32 Post subject: |
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较之诗经<硕鼠>更加入木三分,剥去鼠皮,尽现原形.
写得淋漓尽致,欣赏. |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-06-28 20:22:33 Post subject: |
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鼠辈群居旖旎乡。
痛快淋漓！问好诗人！ |
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王君明
秀才
Joined: 03 Apr 2007
Posts: 250
Location: 甘肃天水
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| Posted: 2007-06-29 07:48:11 Post subject: |
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谢过黄洋界词长和晓松词长！周末愉快！
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2011-01-01 07:53:37 Post subject: |
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笔锋辛辣、犀利，刻划入木三分。
提读。 |
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胡恢宗
秀才
Joined: 15 Mar 2008
Posts: 564
胡恢宗Collection |
| Posted: 2011-01-01 16:52:22 Post subject: |
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鼠辈原形毕露。
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2011-01-01 18:23:37 Post subject: |
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| 蚊子老鼠，人间祸害。诗贬蚊鼠，读来痛快。 |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2011-01-02 20:20:21 Post subject: |
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| 字字入木，刻画有致。学习了。 |
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