半溪明月
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 Posted: 2007-06-20 05:06:43 Post subject: 我厌倦这一切 |
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我厌倦了这一切
文/半溪明月
当你哀叹花的凋零
伤感四月如水流逝
我陪着你
午夜低泣
你有你的惋伤
我有我的悲悯
不同的命题不同的呻吟
密密麻麻的愁绪包围黑夜
你唱着一出独角戏
而我是唯一的观众
女主角的表情在幕后模糊
隐晦的抒情颠倒着日月
雨啊，我的心早已淋湿
要下你就一次下透
我需要雨后的阳光
需要闪电辟开头顶的阴云
当我厌倦了这一切
这如戏的人生
你我该如何收场？
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 06:29:21 Post subject: |
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| 人的确应有宽阔的眼界. |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 21:06:56 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 人的确应有宽阔的眼界. |
重新修改了下，不过意思还没变~问好月光妹妹!  |
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溪语
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 22:26:58 Post subject: |
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我需要雨后的阳光
需要闪电辟开头顶的阴云
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金金
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-22 21:27:57 Post subject: |
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| 溪语 wrote: |
我需要雨后的阳光
需要闪电辟开头顶的阴云 |
问好溪语~  |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-22 21:31:49 Post subject: |
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谢金金赏读~ |
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荷梦
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| Posted: 2007-06-22 23:05:08 Post subject: |
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| 这样的观众当久了，的确让人厌倦！ |
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他乡客
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| Posted: 2007-06-23 05:43:37 Post subject: |
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| 荷梦 wrote: |
| 这样的观众当久了，的确让人厌倦！ |
那就要求退票吧.  |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-23 22:54:07 Post subject: |
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| 他乡客 wrote: |
| 荷梦 wrote: |
| 这样的观众当久了，的确让人厌倦！ |
那就要求退票吧. |
呵呵，问好荷梦和他乡客~ |
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黑雨滴
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| Posted: 2007-06-24 05:13:21 Post subject: |
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其实我也倦了
这些没头绪的声嘶力竭
这些丢失了秋天的果实
这些熟悉得陌生的嘴巴、眼睛
这些村庄深处的空白
让我掩面哭泣
我砍下松枝
坐在父亲的工具箱上
做一个白色的摇蓝
要做得漂亮些
足以放进我长大的四肢
我要把倦了的一切
连同厌恶的我
在大水淹没以前
在乌鸦的歌声响起以前
一起钉在
故乡的泥土里
钉在我倔强的骨头上
如一朵黄花 |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-24 05:51:48 Post subject: |
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| 问好黑雨滴,不错的即情诗~ |
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彭世学
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| Posted: 2007-06-25 17:51:51 Post subject: |
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你唱着一出独角戏
而我是唯一的观众
女主角的表情在幕后模糊
隐晦的抒情颠倒着日月
感同身受！诗句含蓄、朦胧！问好诗人！！
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沙漠
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| Posted: 2007-06-25 22:08:08 Post subject: |
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情绪饱满！
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-26 05:26:09 Post subject: |
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| 问好沙漠和彭世学 |
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温柔一刀
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| Posted: 2007-06-26 17:15:34 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏~ |
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木易沉香
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| Posted: 2007-06-27 01:09:26 Post subject: |
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| 再次欣赏 问好明月 |
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