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胸口門來世界燙燙的妳

博弈
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Posted: 2007-06-22 04:41:12 Post subject: 胸口門來世界燙燙的妳

《胸口門來世界燙燙的妳》有一個音符，豆芽外星人好奇的頭，輕盈的身在花間飛舞，盤繞又是蝴蝶，又是蜂鳥，選停在妳的胸口妳拿著小鏟子時轉回頭笑說: 這草長得好快哦汗珠兒滑落過霧沙的面頰，抬眼見夏天的荷綠，大葉大葉地探進門來還有一個印象派下午，兒時一樣山野間抓蟲，捕蟬有跌跤, 有打鬧, 樹根多瑙小島滴落大陸的臉，不理妳的世界夕陽似土地公地微笑蟬潮，青草海詠波浪回家的褲袋裏竟有兩塊軟糖夏天的皮膚燒燒燙燙蜂鳥的我，嗑著向日葵花天工把蓮蓬頭裝倒？-- 今天有著男高音的衝動並想吻著夏日的妳！ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-06-22 05:45:05 Post subject:

有奇异之语.

白水
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Posted: 2007-06-22 06:39:58 Post subject:

童心的语言, 藏着男高音的衝動

博弈
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Posted: 2007-06-22 13:21:38 Post subject:

问好两位诗人，老来当做顽童，不羡周伯通。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

金金
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Posted: 2007-06-22 19:08:54 Post subject:

题目看不懂耶：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

博弈
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Posted: 2007-06-23 07:30:28 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

题目看不懂耶：）

小儿牙语无师自通。
门，opening, entrance, gateway, 门来转品为动词。 Laughing

不好意思。
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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-06-23 16:42:05 Post subject:

蜂鳥的我，嗑著向日葵花天工把蓮蓬頭裝倒？-- 今天有著男高音的衝動並想吻著夏日的妳！读来让人愉悦~如果能用简体字就好了，繁体字看起来费劲~问好!

kokho
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Posted: 2007-06-28 03:25:51 Post subject:

博弈又谈恋爱了！！！恭喜。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

博弈
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Posted: 2007-06-28 08:22:45 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

博弈又谈恋爱了！！！

恭喜。。。

Cool

。

啧啧啧，又?

不想这小诗能给人这感觉，也好。
不过，我这人向来只恋不爱，爱会伤人，恋能长寿。 Laughing

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