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征对联
大海
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 02:50:18    Post subject: 征对联 Reply with quote
酒乡飘酒香 香引高朋至
友请寓友情 情牵佳客来
朋友开了个饭店，名曰“酒乡饭店”求我给出付对联，我写后感到下联对的不满意，如“乡”是名词，“请”是动词，对仗不工整，今拿出来请哪位高手给对一下联：
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 03:53:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
有些难。提下．
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-06-13 14:37:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
试拟一副以应大海征联
酒乡飘酒香 香引高朋满座
友谊伴友义 义招贵客盈门
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大海
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PostPosted: 2007-06-13 21:10:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
黄洋界 wrote:
试拟一副以应大海征联
酒乡飘酒香 香引高朋满座
友谊伴友义 义招贵客盈门

好！对仗工整，原意昭然。
谢谢！
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梁骥
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 01:43:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
酒乡飘酒香 香引高朋满座
福运托福韵 韵吟大海连心

问好北美枫文友诸君！
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PostPosted: 2007-06-25 03:34:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
梁骥 wrote:
酒乡飘酒香 香引高朋满座
福运托福韵 韵吟大海连心

问好北美枫文友诸君！

好！谢谢梁骥兄！
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