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雪,染白了我梦中的家园(修改后的)
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PostPosted: 2007-06-22 21:36:42    Post subject: 雪,染白了我梦中的家园(修改后的) Reply with quote

雪,染白了我梦中的家园
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日子返回到97年的冬天
许多的镜头退成一片灰色
腊月28的火车正赶往故乡
我们谈论老家的孩子和父母
窗外沟渠边的大树上
为什么站着许多乌鸦?

天黑的时候 我们
看见正熟睡的小儿
屋内煤炉的火焰
幽蓝地舔噬着温情
却为何驱不走这夜的寒?

冷冷的光线投进门缝
儿子望着身边陌生的女人
胆怯地笑着 拿出
一炕头的玩具车 爸爸
怎么还不起床和我玩?

扫不完的满院枯叶
煎熬着锅里的稀饭
咕嘟咕嘟的告警
重播着夜半无人知晓的呻唤

这天杀的无色无味的凶手
让他们睡得太熟 太沉
公公躺在了田头
他昏睡不醒 蒙在厚厚被下

接下来的日子
天空一直发白
乌鸦聒嘈在每个黎明 雪
染白了我梦中的家园
2007-6-23
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PostPosted: 2007-06-22 22:06:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

回头读你的题目
悲呛
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PostPosted: 2007-06-22 22:30:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

因为真实,所以感人!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 04:05:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

明月的另一面吧
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 05:35:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

真情感人
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 15:02:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
回头读你的题目
悲呛

是在老公家发生的事情,感觉人的生命太无常,活着就该过好每一天~问好岛主!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 15:07:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
因为真实,所以感人!

问好荷梦~
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 15:11:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
明月的另一面吧


呵呵,每个人都有不为人知的另一面,就像你是老师还是学生一样还是个谜 Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-06-23 15:27:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
真情感人


谢谢月光妹妹来读~祝好!
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