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彼 岸 尘 封(四)《逝去的夜晚》
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PostPosted: 2007-06-21 16:42:49    Post subject: 彼 岸 尘 封(四)《逝去的夜晚》 Reply with quote

右岸风景

一本落满灰尘的旧笔记本,又让我回到一九八四,那赴美学习的日日夜夜。翻开检出几缕旧诗,虽幼稚,但是彼岸心情真实的留存:



(四)



《逝去的夜晚》



我在寻找那个逝去的夜晚

数不清的汗珠在周身布满

记不起墨迹洇湿多少纸片

这里没有清风明月

这里没有私语爱恋

在这一个个耕耘的黑夜

生活又偿还你多少债券



又是这个夜晚正在消逝

寒风正吹过我的窗前

落下彼岸爱的梦,思的恋

合上厚厚的书本,放下沉重的笔

吹一口故乡情慢慢睡去

梦里拥抱那逝去的夜晚
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PostPosted: 2007-06-21 22:33:42    Post subject: Re: 彼 岸 尘 封(四)《逝去的夜晚》 Reply with quote

茗土 wrote:
右岸风景

一本落满灰尘的旧笔记本,又让我回到一九八四,那赴美学习的日日夜夜。翻开检出几缕旧诗,虽幼稚,但是彼岸心情真实的留存:



(四)



《逝去的夜晚》


。。。


又是这个夜晚正在消逝

寒风正吹过我的窗前

。。。


好句。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-22 18:25:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感浓郁,好诗!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
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PostPosted: 2007-06-22 19:03:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

最后二句不是废话
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