野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
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 Posted: 2007-06-18 16:16:39 Post subject: 乡贤杨松青六十华诞志贺 |
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乡贤杨松青，一方名医，雅好诗书，多有著述。与余父友。今其花甲日近，余父母远在加国，憾不能举酒亲贺，特命予代笔赋诗遥庆，聊为鹿鸣。
松柏龙鳞老更神
青丘云卧守幽村
六旬无事诗为枕
十足多才字比金
大德悬壶犹济世
寿龄采药可还春
志于流水高山处
庆幸天涯若比邻
２００７／６／１８
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2007-06-18 17:15:47 Post subject: |
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| 深得嵌字之妙。 |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2007-06-21 20:59:20 Post subject: |
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| 嵌字诗不好写，既要达意，又要自然，不留痕迹。提上去！ |
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野航
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| Posted: 2007-06-22 18:25:47 Post subject: |
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谢二位诗兄，此类诗写作难度大，不讨好。一般写来没意思。
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