花紫丹
童生
Joined: 20 Jun 2007
Posts: 5
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 Posted: 2007-06-20 18:11:05 Post subject: 开花的黄昏 |
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开花的黄昏
在开花的黄昏
我不会因为其它花艳
延误自己的花期
从一朵花到另一朵花
究竟要有多远?蹲下身
随便握一把泥土
都有前人赏花的脚印
就在刚才
仓促的绽开
留下绿叶绵棉的弯曲
来不及飞翔的蝴蝶
扎进谁的伤口
风默默坐在我身边
眼睛里闪烁着欲望
夕阳在天边生活的很诗意
我的微笑比黄花还瘦
但这一切与开花无关 |
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沙漠
秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 20:39:11 Post subject: |
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诗意和心态都很美！
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 20:47:36 Post subject: |
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| 诗流于心 |
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hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 21:30:23 Post subject: |
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随便握一把泥土
都有前人赏花的脚印
诗意很难翻新
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溪语
秀才
Joined: 16 Mar 2007
Posts: 509
Location: 中国恩施
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| Posted: 2007-06-20 22:55:35 Post subject: |
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从一朵花到另一朵花
究竟要有多远?
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金金
进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007
Posts: 2035
Location: 山东济宁
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