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PostPosted: 2007-06-17 06:26:40    Post subject: 七绝<端阳*寄友> Reply with quote
七绝　<端阳*寄友>

离骚几度又端阳，旧曲新歌透碧江．
天问诗魂何处去，一抔故土伴忠肠．
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PostPosted: 2007-06-17 08:42:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
问天问地问人家，五指山巅巅指涯。
碧水丹心何处觅，唯独孤影对红霞。
Laughing
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-06-17 15:29:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
问天问地问人家，五指山巅巅指涯。
碧水丹心何处觅，唯独孤影对红霞。
Laughing

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完美无缺，简直神了！难道真没问题吗？？？
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PostPosted: 2007-06-17 16:09:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
“碧水丹心何处觅，唯独孤影对红霞”，“天问诗魂何处去，一抔故土伴忠肠”。岛主的诗意好，白水的诗魂佳。妙唱妙和，极为欣赏。

欣赏之余，呵呵，也想续个什么尾，跟着沾点亮：


天问九歌锦绣章，高吟一曲赴国觞。
古来骚赋唯屈子，骚客文人粉墨场。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-17 17:03:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
WOW, 晓松真快手.
HI, 干嘛不参加华河杯, 把PEACE那奖金赢了来, 咱们好去吃大餐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-17 21:11:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
“碧水丹心何处觅，唯独孤影对红霞”，“天问诗魂何处去，一抔故土伴忠肠”。岛主的诗意好，白水的诗魂佳。妙唱妙和，极为欣赏。

我不是鹦鹉学舌 Laughing
依韵和和，就教：

骚赋铺成锦绣章，家山风骨翰林樁。
怀沙应许千滴血，点点如今犹断肠。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-18 18:06:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
冰清老师, 谢谢你的和诗. 快回来啊, 想你了 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-06-20 09:22:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗！欣赏。“一抔故土伴忠肠”好句！
天问？
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PostPosted: 2007-06-20 21:34:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
南北客 wrote:
好诗！欣赏。“一抔故土伴忠肠”好句！
天问？

问好南北客. 借屈子<天问>,继屈子天问, 再问人间缘何不容屈子? Embarassed
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