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十六字令三首－山（给父亲）

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-06-17 19:16:11 Post subject: 十六字令三首－山（给父亲）

山，威猛雄浑立面前。遮风雨，父爱若峰峦。山，出没云霞志趣宽。寒霜厉，不语世时艰。山，险峻恢宏肃浩天。经年久，困苦用身肩。

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Posted: 2007-06-17 20:07:27 Post subject:

歌颂父亲的力作，尤其喜欢第二首。

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Posted: 2007-06-17 21:00:15 Post subject:

父爱如山！这是诗人送给父亲的最好礼物。

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Posted: 2007-06-18 15:58:01 Post subject:

提！ _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-06-18 17:18:51 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

歌颂父亲的力作，尤其喜欢第二首。

谢谢晓松兄！端午快乐，岁岁安康！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-06-18 17:20:05 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

父爱如山！
这是诗人送给父亲的最好礼物。

谢谢冰清老师！端午快乐，岁岁安康！

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Posted: 2007-06-18 17:21:26 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

提！

谢谢！端午快乐，岁岁安康！

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Posted: 2007-06-20 08:47:55 Post subject:

莹雪MM功力显著进步，佩服。问好。

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Posted: 2007-06-20 20:49:53 Post subject:

同和——给父亲十六字令二首山，立地顶天诉庄严。情孤傲，力克千万难。山，也会春时花烂漫。多志趣，风雨渡时闲。

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Posted: 2007-06-21 15:50:27 Post subject:

南北客 wrote:

莹雪MM功力显著进步，佩服。
问好。

谢谢南北GG鼓励！

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-06-21 15:52:03 Post subject:

雨中垂钓人 wrote:

同和——给父亲
十六字令二首
山，
立地顶天诉庄严。
情孤傲，
力克千万难。

山，
也会春时花烂漫。
多志趣，
风雨渡时闲。

谢谢来和！

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Posted: 2007-06-21 16:08:01 Post subject:

父爱如擎天高山

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Posted: 2007-06-21 18:44:40 Post subject:

bluestay wrote:

父爱如擎天高山

谢谢关注，欢迎新朋友！问好。

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