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黄昏汨罗江
夏朵儿
童生


Joined: 01 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-06-15 23:26:07    Post subject: 黄昏汨罗江 Reply with quote

黄昏汨罗江



夏朵儿



我不相信世间

还有比这更沉重的江水

轰然跋涉在苍茫之中

上游是楚辞

下游谁也无法预料



明月深入寒冷的水中

江水因此而清澈

一个怀抱诗稿的女子

握着荒芜的夕阳

以这种至高无上的祭品

在这里拒绝忧伤

如果时光能随我意

我们一定是促膝的一对

在浓稠的黑夜里

感慨"国殇"

或者对饮"天问"



今天黄昏

你是离我最近的人

水中的深度我不懂

只知道是一个

没有任何脚印的地方

面对纯净实现奔涌

听到吗?秭归鸟婉转的笛声

包含着离别的极限

就在我挥手的片刻

见你站在了水域之上
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司马策风
举人


Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
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PostPosted: 2007-06-16 00:41:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

一个女孩子写的吊念诗歌。深情,优雅。

第一小节想象出色大胆。后面几节稍显清浅。总体印象很好。

欢迎新朋友光临
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阿依琼裙
秀才


Joined: 09 Apr 2007
Posts: 920
Location: 废墟之上
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PostPosted: 2007-06-16 05:15:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

上游是楚辞

下游谁也无法预料
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踏过废墟,走来
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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PostPosted: 2007-06-16 13:48:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏!欢迎光临!!

屈原,真正的诗人。不仅在诗,且更在人。

好文采!
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