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心在繁华的街上...

听雨不闻风
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Joined: 16 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2007-06-15 23:58:00 Post subject: 心在繁华的街上...

心在繁华的街上... 文/听雨不闻风寓言里有许多未曾成熟的大都是因了那颗未曾成熟的心即使成熟了的故事里有白马有王子但是总缺不了多心多肺的灰姑娘长河中的忆吼掀起多次痛心的浪潮参天中的梦幻涌回昨日忘却的情份心的情怀畅开时天在胸上心的方丈封闷时地在脚下被伤的心在何处心在繁华的街上阳光粗暴下的阴影如胸腔中的病变呼吸不畅的生命在遮雨伞下心情沉重猪的身价猛升小刀手的心也在猛跳买菜的手艰难地伸出拾元钱不低前时的几角扫大街的每日总能扫到几片荒废的心每每雨后能看到几片曾被遗忘的心在跳车轮下有被辗过的碎心在呼号多的还是相依相靠地心在街上忙着 http://blog.sina.com.cn/TYBWF _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/TYBWF xzbbsoxz@sina.com

司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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Location: 温哥华
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Posted: 2007-06-16 00:45:43 Post subject:

可能因为“心在繁华的街上... ” 所以，感觉有点异香和主旨的纷乱。个见问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-06-16 00:46:09 Post subject:

可能因为“心在繁华的街上... ” 所以，感觉有点意象和主旨的纷乱。个见问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-06-16 05:13:45 Post subject:

扫大街的每日总能扫到几片荒废的心 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Location: 吉林四平
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Posted: 2007-06-16 14:00:27 Post subject:

商业化的必然结果。拜金拜物的必然结果。一边是兴奋、繁荣、激动，一边是烦躁、颓废、焦虑。。。。。。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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