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秋绿
郁雪
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PostPosted: 2006-05-29 17:07:22    Post subject: 秋绿 Reply with quote

秋绿

仿佛是 时间开的玩笑

当秋阳暖暖的照射
一抹新绿
开放在秋的枯黄里

是季节
走错了脚步
叩响了不属于自己的心门

而那绿
随着肃杀的严冬
长眠
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尹士林
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Location: 河北保定易县中学
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PostPosted: 2006-05-29 18:01:44    Post subject: 恭喜 Reply with quote

恭喜啊!有进步,继续努力!
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忧郁过、犹豫过,从未放弃过!!!!!
河北易县中学 尹士林
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乐园成也
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PostPosted: 2006-05-29 19:22:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

意境不错:))欢迎常来!
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郁雪
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PostPosted: 2006-05-31 01:17:03    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

感谢 各位 多多关照 多多批评指正
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