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走不出的风景(我已经不好意思贴自己的诗歌了~)
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 04:01:24    Post subject: 走不出的风景(我已经不好意思贴自己的诗歌了~) Reply with quote
走不出的风景

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远山苍劲，近水流韵
一幅幅色彩鲜亮或郁暗
眼神走不出你诗意的风景

描画的春日曾经走远
四月的风。五月的雨。绊倒的阳光
为六月涂一抹金色

初霁的天，风湿回潮
瘸着麻木的痛，持续微笑
隐忍和跋涉是大地赐予的品质

“永远记住我给你的痛”
眩晕的吮吸使舌间涔出咸
调味无尽的黑夜与白昼

是否痛得太深才不能忘怀
夜深，一扇独醒的窗
坚守一份没有承诺的承诺

“天涯若比邻”的低吟中
月盈月缺，飘渺的影子
折断我无眠的翅膀

2007-6-12
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 05:33:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
是否痛得太深才不能忘怀
夜深，一扇独醒的窗
坚守一份没有承诺的承诺

痴情于事。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 06:33:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
是否痛得太深才不能忘怀

月亮, 可好?
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 07:33:58    Post subject: 在老师的指点下修改了下 Reply with quote
走不出的风景
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远山苍劲 近水流韵
走不出你诗意的风景
鲜亮 或郁暗的抒写

四月的风 吹远曾经的春日
五月的雨中 我们绊倒阳光
之后 你用笔涂抹金色

天初霁 风湿回潮
我用微笑 瘸着麻木的疼
隐忍徘徊在你的树林边

“记住我给你的痛”
眩晕的呼吸 舌尖涔出涩涩的咸
调味夜的黑 昼的白

不能忘怀。是否痛得太深
一扇窗 独醒
一份没有承诺的承诺 坚守

梦中传来你的低吟
月盈月缺 飘渺的影子
折断我 无眠的翅膀

2007-6-12
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 07:44:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
是否痛得太深才不能忘怀

月亮, 可好?


呵呵，很好啊,幸福地痛,谢谢月光妹妹的关心~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 07:56:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
天汉阿文 wrote:
是否痛得太深才不能忘怀
夜深，一扇独醒的窗
坚守一份没有承诺的承诺

痴情于事。


呵呵,问好阿文~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 13:58:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
为什么不好意思。论坛不是洗脸盆，汇成大海才好！

问候明月姊姊！（就别叫阿姨了，哈哈。）
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 20:05:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
是否痛得太深才不能忘怀

月亮, 可好?


呵呵，很好啊,幸福地痛,谢谢月光妹妹的关心~ Very Happy

MY GOD. 幸福地痛? 宁愿不要幸福也不要痛啊Cool 问好
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 21:08:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
为什么不好意思。论坛不是洗脸盆，汇成大海才好！

问候明月姊姊！（就别叫阿姨了，哈哈。）


敢问少君兄弟多大呢?你的诗歌很年轻~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 21:30:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
实话。45岁（毛）

2203226304040XX

身份证号。
咱俩谁大。

问好！
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PostPosted: 2007-06-13 04:43:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
韩少君 wrote:
实话。45岁（毛）

2203226304040XX

身份证号。
咱俩谁大。

问好！


噢,呵呵，还是你大,我68年的,如果你愿意还是喊我姐姐吧 Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-13 20:47:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
半溪明月 wrote:
韩少君 wrote:
实话。45岁（毛）

2203226304040XX

身份证号。
咱俩谁大。

问好！


噢,呵呵，还是你大,我68年的,如果你愿意还是喊我姐姐吧 Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


哈哈，有趣。大家都很坦白。而且年龄都在身份证上，应该是中国特色，以后会改变的。原则上，那个号码不应该推断出任何私人信息。

在北美，夸张点说，大家就象保卫上甘岭一样保卫自己的年龄（信息）。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-13 22:00:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
nobody wrote:
半溪明月 wrote:
韩少君 wrote:
实话。45岁（毛）

2203226304040XX

身份证号。
咱俩谁大。

问好！


噢,呵呵，还是你大,我68年的,如果你愿意还是喊我姐姐吧 Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


哈哈，有趣。大家都很坦白。而且年龄都在身份证上，应该是中国特色，以后会改变的。原则上，那个号码不应该推断出任何私人信息。

在北美，夸张点说，大家就象保卫上甘岭一样保卫自己的年龄（信息）。


呵呵，我们是中国人嘛,不学美国人,中国人也有保卫自己年龄的，我无所谓~久没看到你了,可好? Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-14 01:13:55    Post subject: Re: 走不出的风景(我已经不好意思贴自己的诗歌了~) Reply with quote
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走不出的风景

文/半溪明月

远山苍劲，近水流韵
一幅幅色彩鲜亮或郁暗
眼神走不出你诗意的风景

描画的春日曾经走远
四月的风。五月的雨。绊倒的阳光
为六月涂一抹金色

初霁的天，风湿回潮
瘸着麻木的痛，持续微笑
隐忍和跋涉是大地赐予的品质

好诗！问候半溪明月诗人！！

“永远记住我给你的痛”
眩晕的吮吸使舌间涔出咸
调味无尽的黑夜与白昼

是否痛得太深才不能忘怀
夜深，一扇独醒的窗
坚守一份没有承诺的承诺

“天涯若比邻”的低吟中
月盈月缺，飘渺的影子
折断我无眠的翅膀

2007-6-12

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PostPosted: 2007-06-14 03:30:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
呵呵，有感悟的心情不一定有创作的心情,抓住这灵感的线索,等待积淀后的爆发!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-15 00:43:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
在风景中提炼风景，``````````提~
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PostPosted: 2007-06-15 03:40:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
漂之雨 wrote:
呵呵，有感悟的心情不一定有创作的心情,抓住这灵感的线索,等待积淀后的爆发!


继续积淀吧~问好漂哥,对你的热情指点学生就不再言谢了Smile
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