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[原创]给往昔

莹雪
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Posted: 2006-10-02 18:05:50 Post subject: [原创]给往昔

凝望碧空我忆起了往昔悠悠的如同昨日刚刚经历曾在秋日忧伤的我悲叹着那落叶在风中的慌恐凝望碧空我忆起了往昔悲喜经历已随那燃尽的诗篇消失在往昔难觅它那被毁的踪影凝望碧空我忆起了往昔看那碧空的幽蓝就让那往昔成为过去我的书写仍然延续

赵福治
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Posted: 2006-10-02 19:24:04 Post subject:

凝望碧空我忆起了往昔看那碧空的幽蓝就让那往昔成为过去我的书写仍然延续 .......................有意韵.

莹雪
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Posted: 2006-10-02 19:53:05 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

凝望碧空
我忆起了往昔
看那碧空的幽蓝
就让那往昔成为过去
我的书写仍然延续
.......................有意韵.

谢谢点评！

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