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[原创]灵山湖畔(七律)
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 16:46:20    Post subject: [原创]灵山湖畔(七律) Reply with quote

《灵山湖畔》
urna风之度2007年4月5日
三月灵山卷翠帘,桃源万里洗尘烟。
湖浮日月溪归海,气掩峰峦寺吐巅。
风灭风生青岭在,潮息潮涨水痕添。
千秋君主身云逝,无限苍生在眼前。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 14:08:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

浑然大气, 收放自如.

欢迎新朋友.
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2007-06-10 02:35:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏,赞同白水兄,收放自如。
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http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~
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PostPosted: 2007-06-11 00:27:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水兄、暗香如沁才女的回贴,问好,握手
感觉这里很温馨,祝更好
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PostPosted: 2007-06-12 02:11:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

暗香向各位词长学习.还望多赐教.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-14 21:00:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

无限苍生在眼前,心系黎民。
问好!
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