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与友兴叹

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Posted: 2007-06-09 02:08:27 Post subject: 与友兴叹

与友兴叹人生四轮时口里嚼尽酸甜苦辣天野看透了地页走透了一花一草能向我说：看你咋办？爱、情— 是两个字, 两个字不再和书本签合同借贷来的诗美如水约解了债还了到临了带走俩儿字醉之桥，谁是知晓即笔52秒，就这样。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-06-09 03:25:56 Post subject:

即笔52秒，就这样................鲜活的结尾.

白水
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Posted: 2007-06-09 04:12:41 Post subject:

想说什么?仔细读读

上城
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Posted: 2007-06-09 09:24:04 Post subject:

诗意朦胧．欲说却休也　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　独语者言．问好． _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-09 13:29:11 Post subject:

即笔52秒，就这样。诗外说明？打（）。博弈先生好象热衷现代派（主义）语言手法。尽量反传统。语言随意组合。打破审美常规。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-06-09 19:10:01 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

即笔52秒，就这样。诗外说明？打（）。

博弈先生好象热衷现代派（主义）语言手法。尽量反传统。语言随意组合。打破审美常规。

谢谢诸君。近来确实较忙，这是周末了回来看看。

诗外‘一说‘ Razz

在画里留下签名，签名算不算画的一部分？象征上，
用作者的口头禅或常用语入诗里签名，
就这样算不算诗的一部分？，佚名诗能否被人识认？

人生作成，又以何签名？
名、字二字何物？可是契约债务？
花了20年读书，再花20年忘了，才见到自己。诗人天天和文字计较，当有所悟。

人在大连，和这里的朋友聊天后有所感。学了一些东北口音，他们若看到这首，肯定能认出我来
Smile

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-06-09 22:27:08 Post subject:

很随意的诗.记录当下的心情,其实诗不应该固化为某种特定的格式,多样化,诗歌才能发展~

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-06-10 01:52:15 Post subject:

哇！离我不远。来饮。东北小烧，入腹如刀。如不醉倒，即是英豪！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

博弈
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Posted: 2007-06-15 10:28:52 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

哇！离我不远。来饮。东北小烧，入腹如刀。如不醉倒，即是英豪！

英雄赛酒，月饮江河；美人将进，杯口醉先。 Laughing

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