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六月日记
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PostPosted: 2007-06-08 23:31:24    Post subject: 六月日记 Reply with quote

六月日记

六月第一天,
阳光潮湿阴暗,
刺球开花了,
一只蜂儿在花间留连。
门前的那只木盆也在渴望着变成宫殿。

六月第二三四五天,
雨儿一直缠绵,
心房全部浸湿,
心雨从门窗渗将出来。

六月第六天,
一个电话将梦儿打断,
赶紧把房门打开,
制止荒原狼的徘徊。

六月第七天,
风儿也学会缠绵,
一辆乳色的跑跑卡丁车,
将脑袋撞向田边。

六月第八天,
眼睛重新灿烂,
海面恢复平静,
天空依然高远,
木盆知道自己不会变成宫殿。

六月第九天,
楼上喧嚣一片,
烟雾肆意升腾。
刺球花已没有开过的痕迹,
蜂儿去了哪里,
全无半点消息。
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-06-08 23:49:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

刺球花已没有开过的痕迹,
蜂儿去了哪里,
全无半点消息。

六月才过了一半,好日子都在后面~呵呵,问好! Very Happy
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 03:42:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

这样写到有些味道.
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 14:32:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

蜂儿去了哪里,
全无半点消息。

我正想向你打听蜂儿的消息
她把刺丢在了熊宝宝的鼻尖上
她去找
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blackhorse
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PostPosted: 2007-06-09 14:54:11    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

真的感谢半溪明月,赵福治和韩少军三位老师的评判.问好.远握.
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