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·紫瑰·

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Posted: 2007-06-08 05:04:13 Post subject: ·紫瑰·

·紫瑰· （1）梦里依稀扣紫瑰，经年此地望阳隈。胸中已有长香玉，怎独今朝夜燕杯？（2）穴洞赢光玉泪涟，浩波栖旅几萦牵。心心迭起动情处，可许冰锥再作圆？ *“jisi先生有着充实的精神生活…，即使生命垂危的情人节，他还委托前来探望的青年教师替他给夫人送朵玫瑰。他是如此深爱着、依恋着自己的夫人…” —— 摘自《jisi追悼大会悼词》。

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Posted: 2007-06-08 19:03:45 Post subject:

韵律流畅，情深意浓。

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Posted: 2007-06-08 20:37:53 Post subject:

冰清老师, 何时回加? 6月29日颁奖会, 能参加吗?

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Posted: 2007-06-09 05:17:18 Post subject:

谢谢岛版、莹版鼓励。问好！

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白水 Moonlight wrote:

冰清老师, 何时回加?
6月29日颁奖会, 能参加吗?

我8月中旬返加。
这次，我不能前来参加颁奖盛会，不能和诗友们相聚畅谈，深感遗憾呵。

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Posted: 2007-06-09 05:54:38 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

冰清老师, 何时回加?
6月29日颁奖会, 能参加吗?

我8月中旬返加。
这次，我不能前来参加颁奖盛会，不能和诗友们相聚畅谈，深感遗憾呵。

届时请你的家人来吧. Very Happy

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Posted: 2007-06-09 16:42:52 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

莹版鼓励，问好！

问好冰清老师！
祝冰清老师在国内开心！

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Posted: 2007-06-09 17:46:52 Post subject: Re: ·紫瑰·

[quote="冰清"]·紫瑰· （1）梦里依稀扣紫瑰，经年此地望阳隈。胸中已有长香玉，怎独今朝夜燕杯？（2）穴洞赢光玉泪涟，浩波栖旅几萦牵。心心迭起动情处，可许冰锥再作圆？好诗情深意笃。特别欣赏两诗的结句：胸中已有长香玉，怎独今朝夜燕杯？心心迭起动情处，可许冰锥再作圆？

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Posted: 2007-06-09 18:55:36 Post subject:

珠圆玉润。学习。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-06-10 05:23:59 Post subject: Re: ·紫瑰·

[quote="老山"]

冰清 wrote:

·紫瑰·

（1）
梦里依稀扣紫瑰，
经年此地望阳隈。
胸中已有长香玉，
怎独今朝夜燕杯？
（2）
穴洞赢光玉泪涟，
浩波栖旅几萦牵。
心心迭起动情处，
可许冰锥再作圆？

好诗情深意笃。特别欣赏两诗的结句：

胸中已有长香玉，
怎独今朝夜燕杯？

心心迭起动情处，
可许冰锥再作圆？

野航 wrote:

珠圆玉润。学习。

二位词长肯定，我当然高兴啰！
“啰”这语尾词，大概是我们的家乡话吧！

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Posted: 2007-06-10 09:37:54 Post subject: Re: ·紫瑰·

冰清 wrote:

·紫瑰·

（1）
梦里依稀扣紫瑰，
经年此地望阳隈。
胸中已有长香玉，
怎独今朝夜燕杯？

（2）
穴洞赢光玉泪涟，
浩波栖旅几萦牵。
心心迭起动情处，
可许冰锥再作圆？

*“jisi先生有着充实的精神生活…，即使生命垂危的情人节，他还委托前来探望的青年教师替他给夫人送朵玫瑰。他是如此深爱着、依恋着自己的夫人…” —— 摘自《jisi追悼大会悼词》。

冰清老师，催人泪下之作，学习了，并祝旅途平安。

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Posted: 2007-06-12 00:43:09 Post subject:

谢谢秋版！还有两个月，我们又可以见面了。盼望着。

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Posted: 2007-06-12 01:44:13 Post subject:

进来学习老师佳作 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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