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雪的联想
东北诗弦
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Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 22:10:26    Post subject: 雪的联想 Reply with quote

北风卷地的时节
灌木,蒿草俱已枯萎、断折
此时,你翩然而至
覆盖了山川,冰河和原野

状若枝桠上的严霜
形似倾城倾国的雾凇
如果再追加一段旋风
吹落的高度
怎及你飘落的高度

身怀流星的信念
愿为蓝田美玉的碎片
香气较腊梅,梨花稍逊
但色泽也胜其几分

来时,你如金风中
飘飞的枫叶
恬淡,自由,悄无声息
好似瑶宫的仙子舞着群衣
只是周遭没有奇花,佳酿与乐工
一片冰封
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但觉高歌有鬼神,焉知饿死填沟壑?
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hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 08:15:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

身怀流星的信念
愿为蓝田美玉的碎片

形状是写好了
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桔子
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 15:30:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,东北诗弦.来听你的弦音. Laughing
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韩少君
进士出身


Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 16:42:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

战罢玉龙三百万,败鳞残甲满天飞。

梅花须逊三分雪,雪输梅花一段香。
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345
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杨海军
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PostPosted: 2007-06-07 17:27:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言很好,在诗的内蕴上下功夫!问候诗弦老弟!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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