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原创--请指正-古诗词写意(四章)/散文诗
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PostPosted: 2007-05-26 21:50:19    Post subject: 原创--请指正-古诗词写意(四章)/散文诗 Reply with quote

古诗词写意(四章)
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小桥流水人家
-选自元.马致远曲《天净沙?秋思》

这是一幅最具代表的古典的乡村中国画。
小桥横亘岁月时空之上,背负久远的历史,愿望和爱情有了落脚点。
流水潺潺,驿动永恒的心。一副清淡的形状,委身于柔弱的水。
人家最具体的含义,便是繁衍和生息,它温暖了游子的眼睛,所以眼泪才于不知不觉中流下来。
线装的一部古籍,被漫无边际的绿点染。小桥是片片纤弱的白云,斑斑驳驳地静卧于时间于空间。桥下婉约的流水,正静静地绕过一处处的风花雪月的低吟。远处炊烟闪现,人家已有了千年万年,走过唐宋元明清的诗篇。
走过了许多日子之后,我不再是梦中的少年,独守一叶扁舟,待记忆下沉为礁石,生命便是无涯的海面,浪打船舷,浪打船舷。
而小桥流水人家,是中国的一帧素朴的水墨,守着祥和的天空,清丽的身影,永远灿烂着幸福的容颜。
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应是绿肥而瘦
-选自宋.李清照词《如梦令》

这世界,什么能彻底的藏得住?比如绿、红。
花用开谢行走,兽用动静行走,人用生死行走,怎么走都有会路。
还记得昨夜的情景吧!醉后复醒,才知风疏雨骤。
视觉,满是簇簇流转的绿;嗅觉,那是缕缕馨香的绿;感觉,尽是柔若无骨的绿,被绿包围。倘若,思绪有颜色,那此时思绪定是凝滞的绿;倘若,思想有颜色,那此时思想定是被绿染透。
又发现绿色里有红色的光在流动,流着一片深深切切的柔情,流成一片浩浩荡荡的执著,呈现出一种去日弥留的眼神。
试问卷帘人,又谁来做陪伴?
染于红尘太久的记忆全部飘远,没有幻想和企求,没有奢望和贪念。只有一种什么也不想等的等待。
却道海棠依旧。昨日新填的词依然婉约明丽,我却读出了一些悲凉和痛楚。可有抚琴的素衣,可有豪饮的金樽,可有践约而来的心情?
你还是那样的贪杯吗?单衣试酒的你,不可久坐风雨亭下,该披上你出嫁时的那件衣了。
谁也不可否认,不管是绿,不管是红,都是人生中或多或少的一部分。
当我把对你陌生的部分渐渐弥补整齐之后,才知道,有时候,只在拥有一朵花,已然胜过拥有整个花季了。

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小轩窗 正梳妆
--选自宋.苏轼词《江城子》

跨过一道季节的门槛,我推窗看见,你就在那魂牵梦萦的小轩窗前。
一点素唇,等谁来点?一支金簪,等谁来簪?鬓,在挽和未挽之间;妆,在梳与未梳之间。
十年生死两茫茫。
整整十年等待的相思啊!
隔着厚厚的时间与空间,带着沉沉的思念与爱恋,我为人生最美的情感打动得潸然泪下。人生,本来就有太多的不尽意,挫折、痛苦与失落。还有,离愁别念。还有,有情人不能成眷属。付出有时与得到根本不成比例。太多的希望总是成为泡影,梦里难圆的梦呀使人心痛。却总是这样执著地爱着、恋着、怨着,直到不能再用生命去爱,直到生命消失。可去来都是缘,不是你我能够左右。
不思量,自难忘。
总是在该忘记时想起,藏在记忆中某个深刻的角落里,在不经意时跳出来给你心灵一次轻轻的击打。
从前的从前是什么时候?以后的以后呢?
我隐秘的忧伤,只能是从想象中你能悟解的旋律,弹拨无弦的吉他。
夜来幽梦忽还乡,小轩窗,正梳妆。难道梦里,还要隔着一道小窗吗?
彩色的丝缎已褪尽了宋的底色,谁在百无聊赖地翻着一本线装古籍,再叹一口气,将它一抛,就抛到记忆的阁楼内......

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古道西风瘦马
___选自元.马致远曲《天净沙.秋思》

道路在画里便成了风景。道路在脚下便成了泥泞和坎坷。
砍断缆绳,那条小路跌进荒野,如枪声下的猎物,望西风而遁。你也在这样的时候出现,马的蹄声格外沉重。
一匹孤独的马,伫立于道路的边缘,似一个荒凉沧桑的比喻,在静穆的象形文字间,使整个画面显得愈发雄浑和悲壮。
不要问我从哪里来,流浪流浪,流流浪浪。
这样的时候,很容易让人想起家,那个温暖的小盒子。
最静的时候,常想起家。一种声音把血管涨的好疼好疼。星座已更换了无数次的位置,月和路依旧飘摇,没有人听到马的足音,尘土里,英雄只剩下一声长啸。家啊家,你吞进数不尽的青春年华,吐出时,只剩下一抔幽怨的黄沙。
夕阳里有声音传来,一条路冉冉缭绕进那缕炊烟,骑马的人亦在天涯,晚唱忽明忽暗。当实现啄破梦想,有马蹄声正铺向你的驿站,而你诵读家乡的灯火后,该放纵马的缰绳了。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-27 02:30:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

题目很吸引人呀
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语言很优美呢,如果再精炼些就更好了
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PostPosted: 2007-06-06 19:36:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

有些感觉在脑子里,而作者能表达如昔,不容易啊
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语言很优美
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