游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
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Posted: 2007-06-02 18:39:35 Post subject: 卜算子 见伊人哭泣 |
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——给九月薄荷
半月为谁描?
带雨悄悄诉。
几点玲珑对面生,
风过回香路。
不是树难停,
还有芳华妒。
一夜诚心在绛珠,
淋浪何丰富! |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-06-02 18:41:06 Post subject: |
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感觉好
爱情的力量
 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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游向高原的鱼 秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 382
游向高原的鱼Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-02 19:41:51 Post subject: |
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我自己感觉从事创作,的确要有爱——当然不只是爱自己身边的人。 _________________ 人生乃是一面镜子,在其中认识自己。 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2007-06-03 08:50:06 Post subject: |
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诗为情生,感人!
前片尤甚。 |
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心怡 童生
Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 36 Location: 中国成都 心怡Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-06 16:49:18 Post subject: |
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半月为谁描?
带雨悄悄诉。
几点玲珑对面生,
风过回香路。
尤欣赏这一节,创作由情而生,这点大多数人们都如此 _________________ 一场雨散去后,紫色的轻烟开始缥缈,在空际中盘旋,终于消失了........ |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-06-09 14:05:32 Post subject: |
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| 感人之作. 问好高原鱼. |
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