莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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 Posted: 2007-06-02 17:53:26 Post subject: 满庭芳－云 |
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万态型灵，
千姿体重，
变雾游伴山行。
赏观涛涌，
柔弱似苔萍。
化雨飞空赞颂，
休狂动、
过则洪生。
如滴泪，
为谁心痛，
润物到天明。
聆听，
临晓梦，
吟歌赋增，
可绘征程。
叹言拙词轻，
未赞身精。
总有妙诗怎奉？
回眸处、
早已空晴。
愁何弄、
望开远景，
事事任风零。 |
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hepingdao
Site Admin
Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
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| Posted: 2007-06-02 18:43:24 Post subject: |
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这个特别好
感觉上了一个台阶
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游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
游向高原的鱼Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-02 18:47:26 Post subject: |
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事事任风零。
喜欢这种心态。
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-02 23:21:35 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
这个特别好
感觉上了一个台阶 |
谢谢大哥鼓励！  我一定继续努力。  |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-02 23:22:51 Post subject: |
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| 游向高原的鱼 wrote: |
事事任风零。
喜欢这种心态。 |
谢谢！ |
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品玉
秀才
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Posts: 156
Location: 吉林
品玉Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-02 23:47:47 Post subject: |
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欣赏!很有感觉!
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-03 06:08:32 Post subject: |
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| 更喜欢上片的具象化、人格化！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-04 16:21:48 Post subject: |
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谢谢！ |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-06-04 16:23:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢冰清老师斧正！ |
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