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蔬菜短章(一)
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 20:58:55    Post subject: 蔬菜短章(一) Reply with quote

蔬菜短章(一)

黄瓜

即便脆嫩经不得磕碰
年少的你,仍将
满身的刺根根竖起

时光有凹凸的磨
磨去一根根青刺
你逐渐圆滑
而我们却在怀念,怀念
你青稚的生命




茄子

喜穿紫衣的娇柔女子
皮肤雪白,绵软
爱情的芝麻开在内心
你无意打开,搁置得太久
心凉得发黑
可被你醋的蜜语一泡,
亦焕发新颜

辣椒

她们幻想爱情
无论青绿的泼辣
还是酱红的甜润,
倩瘦或丰润的姿态
摇曳在各自的风景

她们一生追求的幸福
就是逐渐丰满自己
刺绣一件红嫁衣
等温柔的手
幸福地采摘


豆角

一弯月眉
笑眯眯喊着阿哥
布谷鸟声声,阿哥不应
你的月亮船
载满玉润的珠
心思老了豆荚
滚落一地相思的泪
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 21:17:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

有灵气
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 04:56:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
有灵气

谢岛主~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 05:17:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

我今晚食堂吃了辣椒,口干得很。
现在想吃一根黄瓜解解渴
茄子笑得很甜
豆角哈哈地弯了腰
什么时候能到你的菜园子去
吃到新鲜的菜蔬? Smile
温一壶酒
石头,剪刀,布。。。。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 06:16:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
我今晚食堂吃了辣椒,口干得很。
现在想吃一根黄瓜解解渴
茄子笑得很甜
豆角哈哈地弯了腰
什么时候能到你的菜园子去
吃到新鲜的菜蔬? Smile
温一壶酒
石头,剪刀,布。。。。

什么时候都能吃到新鲜的时令小菜,只要你把酒提来~ Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
你这即兴诗不错~
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 07:20:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

我怎么舍得去吃你的蔬菜啊~~?? Confused
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 15:05:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

她们一生追求的幸福
就是逐渐丰满自己
刺绣一件红嫁衣
等温柔的手
幸福地采摘


喜欢这语言!!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 20:48:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜穿姿衣的娇柔女子——"姿衣"是"紫衣"所误吗?
知道茄子的“心”发黑该怎么办了:)

喜欢前后两个!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 07:02:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

灵动. 等<二> Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 17:49:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢!三、四、尤佳。清爽。甜美。好诗。细腻的心性!问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 19:23:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
我怎么舍得去吃你的蔬菜啊~~?? Confused


问好阿琼,做出来的菜就是请大家品尝的,好不好吃,是另一回事,呵呵,请多批 Very Happy ~
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 18:27:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

好清香的农家菜!喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 20:01:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
好清香的农家菜!喜欢!

谢喜欢!问好山城子! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-02 05:03:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

这一组灵秀,后三首更成熟。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-02 10:03:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

感觉好,就象嘴里正吃着新鲜的,眼里还在看着地里长着的。呵呵~~~~~~~


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PostPosted: 2007-06-02 13:03:52    Post subject: 很有感觉的一组! Reply with quote

诗是生活的提炼,你已边缘于诗的内核!语言把握上要做到贴切自然.个见!问好!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-03 00:35:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢阿文,冷蝉的评阅,谢漂哥一直的指点和支持,感谢一路有你! Smile
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