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谷雨后的坝子
山城子
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 17:03:36    Post subject: 谷雨后的坝子 Reply with quote

谷雨后的坝子
文/山城子

1、被割倒的油菜籽

再也不如花期那样热闹美丽
一行一行一堆一堆躺在田里
像肘撑炕沿,一面想着心事
一面为孩子哺乳的北方妇女
枯黄着面容,凌乱着头发
暮春时节,竟走到了秋季


2、绳索半径的牛们

分别被主人固定在油菜田里
绳索半径啃食着情操
没法集合起来开个什么会议
都心事重重东张西望
耕春耕秋也就那么几天
更多的都是没滋没味的四季

3、挥镰的农民们

散散落落三三两两分布田里
农妇与农夫都拱着背挥着镰
挥着拱着自家的“责任”
未闻有歌唱,也未闻有笑语
只有不停的单调与枯燥
粘贴在谷雨后潮湿了的空气

(晚上11时许记)
——2007-4-24于毛栗坡小屋
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 17:42:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

有滋味。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 19:18:54    Post subject: 不错的一组短诗. Reply with quote

不错的一组短诗.
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 20:36:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

这组不错.最喜欢第一个,形象鲜活!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-30 23:41:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

耕春耕秋也就那么几天
更多的都是没滋没味的四季

经典之句,学习!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 03:56:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

我所熟悉的农忙场景,在你的文字里重现了。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 18:15:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

对于旁观者,劳动是美好的;对于劳动者,旁观是痛苦的。
我们长年匍匐于土地的人, “身”感枯燥和乏味。劳动的果实美好。但它的过程我望而生畏。东辽河问候西辽河。问候辽河两岸辛苦的父老!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 17:56:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢这么多朋友留言!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 17:57:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
对于旁观者,劳动是美好的;对于劳动者,旁观是痛苦的。
我们长年匍匐于土地的人, “身”感枯燥和乏味。劳动的果实美好。但它的过程我望而生畏。东辽河问候西辽河。问候辽河两岸辛苦的父老!


——问好隔河老乡!
——农民辛苦依然!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 18:05:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

前两个更有好味~问好山城子
耕春耕秋也就那么几天
更多的都是没滋没味的四季 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 18:08:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好明月!谢谢您了!
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