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定风波.听<十面埋伏>

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Posted: 2007-05-31 02:38:39 Post subject: 定风波.听<十面埋伏>

虞姬言（一）一曲琵琶十面声，旧程未了又新程。弹倦沙场千古事，谁忆，忍看鞍马掩心惊。玉指频拨方寸乱，肠断，泪珠点滴入旗旌。若许有人询此际，应思，莫教血雨染池城！项羽云（二）一曲琵琶十面声，旧程未了又新程。弹落沙场千古事，谁忆，忍看鞍马掩心惊。坐帐未曾方寸乱，拍案，豪情点滴入旗旌。纵许伏军行万计，何畏？敢教血雨染池城！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-31 05:46:25 Post subject:

听十面埋伏, 代虞姬项羽言,琴心剣胆之情洋溢其间,欣赏问好.

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Posted: 2007-06-01 15:32:27 Post subject:

英雄美人千古恨，生死诀别一瞬间。好词，问好暗香。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发）智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/

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Posted: 2007-06-01 16:24:33 Post subject:

好词！如闻其声。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-06-01 17:50:06 Post subject:

喜欢“拍案”二字。

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Posted: 2007-06-03 02:15:56 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

听十面埋伏, 代虞姬项羽言,琴心剣胆之情洋溢其间,欣赏问好.

谢谢评阅。问好。
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Posted: 2007-06-03 02:19:06 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

喜欢“拍案”二字。

谢谢评阅。
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Posted: 2007-06-03 02:21:30 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

好词！如闻其声。

谢谢鼓励。问好。
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Posted: 2007-06-03 02:25:36 Post subject:

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英雄美人千古恨，生死诀别一瞬间。
好词，问好暗香。

谢谢评阅。问好．
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Posted: 2007-06-03 09:10:02 Post subject:

从神情、动作的鲜明对比来表现虞姬、项羽的心绪、意念，这确实是一种创造性的尝试！不过像这类被人们千古传诵的题材，此中的哀婉、悲壮，丰富而复杂的情感，在短短的词章中，又像难以表达穷尽的呵！

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Posted: 2007-06-04 00:40:29 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

从神情、动作的鲜明对比来表现虞姬、项羽的心绪、意念，这确实是一种创造性的尝试！
不过像这类被人们千古传诵的题材，此中的哀婉、悲壮，丰富而复杂的情感，在短短的词章中，又像难以表达穷尽的呵！

冰清老师说的是．当时写的时候听着＜十面埋伏＞，写的时候并没有想用二者口气去写．只是写到后来想想尝试用男女二者的眼光看待战争会如何．于是就借用了两位古人．问好老师．
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