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定风波.听<十面埋伏>
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 02:38:39    Post subject: 定风波.听<十面埋伏> Reply with quote

虞姬言(一)
一曲琵琶十面声,旧程未了又新程。弹倦沙场千古事,谁忆,忍看鞍马掩心惊。 玉指频拨方寸乱,肠断,泪珠点滴入旗旌。若许有人询此际,应思,莫教血雨染池城!

项羽云(二)
一曲琵琶十面声,旧程未了又新程。弹落沙场千古事,谁忆,忍看鞍马掩心惊。 坐帐未曾方寸乱,拍案,豪情点滴入旗旌。纵许伏军行万计,何畏?敢教血雨染池城!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-31 05:46:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

听十面埋伏, 代虞姬项羽言,琴心剣胆 之情洋溢其间,欣赏问好.
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 15:32:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

英雄美人千古恨,生死诀别一瞬间。
好词,问好暗香。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 16:24:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词!如闻其声。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 17:50:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢“拍案”二字。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-03 02:15:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
听十面埋伏, 代虞姬项羽言,琴心剣胆 之情洋溢其间,欣赏问好.


谢谢评阅。问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-03 02:19:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
喜欢“拍案”二字。



谢谢评阅。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-03 02:21:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

野航 wrote:
好词!如闻其声。


谢谢鼓励。问好。
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PostPosted: 2007-06-03 02:25:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

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英雄美人千古恨,生死诀别一瞬间。
好词,问好暗香。


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PostPosted: 2007-06-03 09:10:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

从神情、动作的鲜明对比来表现虞姬、项羽的心绪、意念,这确实是一种创造性的尝试!
不过像这类被人们千古传诵的题材,此中的哀婉、悲壮,丰富而复杂的情感,在短短的词章中,又像难以表达穷尽的呵!
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PostPosted: 2007-06-04 00:40:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
从神情、动作的鲜明对比来表现虞姬、项羽的心绪、意念,这确实是一种创造性的尝试!
不过像这类被人们千古传诵的题材,此中的哀婉、悲壮,丰富而复杂的情感,在短短的词章中,又像难以表达穷尽的呵!


冰清老师说的是.当时写的时候听着<十面埋伏>,写的时候并没有想用二者口气去写.只是写到后来想想尝试用男女二者的眼光看待战争会如何.于是就借用了两位古人.问好老师.
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