半溪明月
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红蜘蛛
文/半溪明月
一只红蜘蛛
白天潜于你的血液
结纤细密集的网
你是她庞大的猎物
她是你最隐秘的精灵
有星星和月光的夜晚
悄悄爬出肌肤
那样的弱小
在汗绒的森林里漫步
和你私语，拟或
酥痒地爬上爬下
倏然，你食指弹出
红蜘蛛
香消玉殒
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hepingdao
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| Posted: 2007-05-29 09:45:58 Post subject: |
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半溪明月愈写愈好了
不简单呀,这个女人
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韩少君
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| Posted: 2007-05-29 13:59:50 Post subject: |
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拜读。 
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-29 20:49:45 Post subject: |
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| hepingdao wrote: |
半溪明月愈写愈好了
不简单呀,这个女人
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呵呵,谢谢岛主这么高的评价,好高兴~ |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-05-29 20:50:32 Post subject: |
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| 韩少君 wrote: |
| 拜读。 |
问好少君! |
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沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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| Posted: 2007-05-30 20:41:19 Post subject: |
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这首能看到灵性！人，需要战胜自己！
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白水
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| Posted: 2007-05-31 06:58:41 Post subject: |
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| 好诗, 顶 |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-06-01 09:44:12 Post subject: |
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| 白水 Moonlight wrote: |
| 好诗, 顶 |
月光妹妹好~ |
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山城子
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| Posted: 2007-06-01 18:15:48 Post subject: |
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想象别致！余味痛苦！
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