莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
 Posted: 2007-05-30 00:29:12 Post subject: 水调歌头－登凤凰山见鹰有感 |
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凤岭青云漫，
身在顶峰间。
转眸赏尽山远，
高处有余寒。
可会东坡词叹？
临此时知是劝，
敬语暗含旋。
丽句涌心田，
默读更明言。
无飞鸟，
鹰往返，
乐如仙。
轻舒展翼，
爱舞幽谷决人观。
啸傲凌河两岸，
正是志踌未减，
不惧冷风残。
也晓征途难，
应自勇于前。 |
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暗香如沁
秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-05-31 05:57:41 Post subject: |
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| 意气昂扬,自励自勉,与暗香同感. |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-05-31 17:18:26 Post subject: |
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| 暗香如沁 wrote: |
| 好一首自勉的好作品。问好雪．尤喜下阕． |
谢谢暗香jj鼓励！问好。  |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-05-31 17:20:59 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 意气昂扬,自励自勉,与暗香同感. |
谢谢！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
| Posted: 2007-05-31 20:01:31 Post subject: |
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也晓征途难，
应自勇于前。
学习! |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2007-05-31 22:15:05 Post subject: |
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| 晓松 wrote: |
也晓征途难，
应自勇于前。
学习! |
过誉！ |
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