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一些用诗可以纪录的....(月光此月现形记)
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 08:09:05    Post subject: 一些用诗可以纪录的....(月光此月现形记) Reply with quote

公司一日

容颜
被繁琐的文件
压扁 变形
愿景
在长霉的诗中
发抖 抽筋


洪荒爱情

悲与喜换班出现
心的叮咚
洪荒可以听到
你听不到
顺流漂来一只木筏
我听到一个声音
说 度我
我坐上去
开始接受逆流的命运


另一些诡异

眸子疲惫的闪烁
脚步灵捷的转动
用另一种眼光
偷看生命的本质
期待 在另一个拐弯
有另一双
闪亮的眸子


另一种成长

被月光
温暖的心坎上
抽出
带血的刀
在爱的结痂处
建一幢房子


斋 戒

五脏六腑都
毫无出口的时候
开始后悔原来的毫无信仰
于是 在佛的开化下
相信轮回
青菜 在嘴里打转
业因 果报
期待下世
不做红尘的情人
做颗有用的青菜
不属于你

属于佛
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残缺处
去完整
诗的美丽
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 08:21:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

洪荒爱情

悲与喜换班出现
心的叮咚
洪荒可以听到
你听不到
顺流漂来一只木筏
我听到一个声音
说 度我
我坐上去
开始接受逆流的命运

质感好

可以再精炼一些
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PostPosted: 2007-05-29 14:02:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

不做红尘的情人
做颗有用的青菜
不属于你

属于佛

太素了!我受不了——
Rolling Eyes
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