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{原创}三叶草,九曲路

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Posted: 2007-05-27 20:18:31 Post subject: {原创}三叶草,九曲路

风绿了嫁衣三叶草娶了黑土新娘 "攥紧我的手我们一起走四方" 黑土怀抱两个人身娃娃摇摇晃晃的挥别伸着长臂抚摩远行足底的九曲路挥别听了三十二年的乡音挥别割舍不得的红砖和篱笆挥别眸子后面最深沉的悯光挥别第一声啼哭的老屋挥别安睡祖先的北坡牵着三叶草的衣襟背着熟悉的面孔背着千万声嘱托踏上另一条陌生的九曲路这是一条铺满泥沙荒芜的九曲路风消瘦了三叶草风疼了三叶草风疼了黑土和人身娃娃圣女姑妈和珍女来了鱼弟水妹来了太阳用金色的五指把三叶草和黑土托起黑土耗尽的潮湿葱绿了三叶草黑土拥抱了太阳把燃烧的自己砌进高高的楼房一阵香风吹走了三叶草墙角里传出 “攥紧我的手......” 漂向弯弯的九曲路注解: 圣女姑妈：困在它乡时，偶遇的亲人。珍女：困在它乡时，偶遇的同学。 _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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Posted: 2007-05-27 20:55:53 Post subject:

人参娃娃? 温婉的故事和笔调 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-05-27 22:31:20 Post subject:

有思想性 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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Posted: 2007-05-28 02:58:33 Post subject:

黑土拥抱了太阳把燃烧的自己砌进高高的楼房一阵香风吹走了三叶草墙角里传出 “攥紧我的手......” 漂向弯弯的九曲路有些魔幻的气氛。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2007-05-28 02:59:03 Post subject:

问候楼主! 问候金金! 这是我的生活,人身娃娃是我的两个宝贝女儿,呵呵! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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Posted: 2007-05-28 03:44:14 Post subject:

学习了，问好！

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Posted: 2007-05-30 03:04:04 Post subject:

问候少军! 问候一舟! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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Posted: 2007-06-03 07:36:04 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

有思想性

支持文字也特别。。。

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乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-06-03 11:33:13 Post subject:

品玉 wrote:

问候楼主!
问候金金!
这是我的生活,人身娃娃是我的两个宝贝女儿,呵呵!

好福气,是双胞胎吗?
别致,三叶草代表希望,黑土地代表故乡,九曲代表艰难~学习了!

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Posted: 2007-06-03 13:57:15 Post subject:

也来支持下

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Posted: 2007-06-04 04:52:51 Post subject:

问候品玉诗人！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-06-05 00:18:49 Post subject:

回敬各位! 人生何尝不是首诗呢??!! _________________ 孤独的执烛者，在黑暗的水面上留下火苗的伤口～～～～～

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