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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 07:13:34    Post subject: 试和KOKHO<古风 劝茶吟> Reply with quote
红袖添香羞碧螺 泼洒浓墨写绿嫩

伯牙抚琴声音末 淡茶烈酒陪月落
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一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；
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PostPosted: 2007-05-24 07:18:23    Post subject: Reply with quote
作业交了,别说偶偷懒,是你没看见! Laughing Laughing Laughing
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一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；
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PostPosted: 2007-05-26 12:27:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
格律上还得学习．立意好．
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PostPosted: 2007-05-27 09:19:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
暗香如沁 wrote:
格律上还得学习．立意好．

谢指教! Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-05-28 11:50:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
我也不懂格律。。。 来学学。

谢谢 好朋友 我出差刚回来。。。

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PostPosted: 2007-06-01 17:56:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
KOKHO兄天天忙着给地球镶金边,自然很辛苦.上茶! cheers
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PostPosted: 2007-06-02 10:50:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
看到了，学习了~~~~~~~```
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