Maple Review :: View topic - 八声甘州.夜思

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 古韵新音

八声甘州.夜思

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-22 07:00:21 Post subject: 八声甘州.夜思

听夜来风雨叩春门，花落已无痕。借孤灯一盏，痴心半缕，黯黯伤神。数载天涯漂泊，只影伴晨昏。悄向菩提诉，不入红尘。愿载白云归去，对萧萧竹影，漫寄诗魂。踏清莲起舞，悲喜两离分。等闲来、问禅求道，又何需、折柳证前因？如斯矣、寄逍遥处，醉卧乾坤。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

qxz-123456
童生

Joined: 18 May 2007
Posts: 84
Location: 内蒙赤峰
qxz-123456Collection

Posted: 2007-05-22 14:40:01 Post subject:

问候暗香。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发）智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/

kokho
进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
kokhoCollection

Posted: 2007-05-22 21:17:25 Post subject:

数载天涯漂泊，只影伴晨昏。悄向菩提诉，不入红尘。 ... 踏清莲起舞，悲喜两离分。等闲来、问禅求道，又何需、折柳证前因？《》真是妙笔生花。。。该是位美才女吧？ _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-22 23:15:39 Post subject:

qxz-123456 wrote:

问候暗香。

问智发老师好．
_________________
http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-22 23:17:42 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

数载天涯漂泊，只影伴晨昏。
悄向菩提诉，不入红尘。
...
踏清莲起舞，悲喜两离分。
等闲来、问禅求道，又何需、折柳证前因？

《》真是妙笔生花。。。该是位美才女吧？

Cool

说笑了。暗香平凡之极．
_________________
http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-05-23 05:02:27 Post subject:

这等好词, 缘何不加精? 哪位斑斑, 还我一愿

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921

冰清Collection

Posted: 2007-05-23 23:47:02 Post subject:

骨相、情韵都不错。越读越觉得有学不完的东西！

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-26 12:09:02 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

这等好词, 缘何不加精?

哪位斑斑, 还我一愿 Confused

感谢白水帅哥的鼓励。好久不见。
_________________
http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-26 12:10:46 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

骨相、情韵都不错。
越读越觉得有学不完的东西！

问好冰清．还请多指教。
_________________
http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

晓松
举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192

晓松Collection

Posted: 2007-05-28 19:49:35 Post subject:

等闲来，如斯矣，...... 诗句越来越老到了。支持一下。

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-29 02:35:32 Post subject:

谢谢晓松鼓励。问好． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

野航
秀才

Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection

Posted: 2007-05-29 15:30:53 Post subject:

果然到位。如果要提点意见的话，我得说：太标准了，冲谈了个人性的东西. _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

不亦悦乎
童生

Joined: 02 Apr 2007
Posts: 40

不亦悦乎Collection

Posted: 2007-05-29 22:16:58 Post subject:

好词，连读数遍。好词。 “又何需、折柳证前因？”欣赏不已。

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-31 02:04:35 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

果然到位。如果要提点意见的话，我得说：太标准了，冲谈了个人性的东西.

谢谢提意见。下次注意：）
_________________
http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

暗香如沁
秀才

Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Posts: 885
Location: 北京
暗香如沁Collection

Posted: 2007-05-31 02:07:06 Post subject:

不亦悦乎 wrote:

好词，连读数遍。好词。
“又何需、折柳证前因？”欣赏不已。

谢谢鼓励。问好．
_________________
http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 古韵新音

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME