zhangmin
秀才
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 450
Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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 Posted: 2007-05-21 16:41:06 Post subject: 五月麦风 |
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五月,我走进村庄
妒嫉你的香味,赶走
叹息的风铃,让雄鸡
为岁月歌唱
五月,风
四处寻找,我留在
土墙上的情书,还疑问
你有没有收到?季节
给你的礼物
五月,蚯蚓
期盼我归来,起早贪黑
把温床铺软
五月,把春给的潮湿
晒干,风理顺发尖.而且
是千年不变的颜色.为什么
要说我崇洋媚外?别想
把我的心揉碎,飘起外衣
你终于爱上了我
中国.江苏.张敏 |
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龙飞
童生
Joined: 13 May 2007
Posts: 40
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 17:37:08 Post subject: |
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| 有韵味！耐读！ |
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赵福治
探花
Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 19:56:47 Post subject: |
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把我的心揉碎,飘起外衣
你终于爱上了我 |
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鲁绪刚
秀才
Joined: 27 May 2006
Posts: 121
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| Posted: 2007-05-21 23:53:51 Post subject: |
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| 好诗提起来欣赏,学习! |
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-05-22 02:38:59 Post subject: |
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拜读 。 
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靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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zhangmin
秀才
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Posts: 450
Location: 中国.江苏.张家港
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| Posted: 2007-05-22 16:28:01 Post subject: |
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谢谢大家，问好．
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风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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杨海军
进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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