qxz-123456 童生
Joined: 18 May 2007 Posts: 84 Location: 内蒙赤峰 qxz-123456Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-20 14:06:27 Post subject: 雷雨 |
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雷雨
天公震怒荡苍穹,漫卷乌云遍宇宫。
电闪辉光惊四海,雷鸣巨响炸三嵩。
风驰送走娇娇客,雨瀑迎来凛凛翁。
立志鲲鹏欣展翅,追星赶月傲长空。
_________________ 齐喜章(智发)
智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/ |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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qxz-123456 童生
Joined: 18 May 2007 Posts: 84 Location: 内蒙赤峰 qxz-123456Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-21 03:53:48 Post subject: |
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暗香如沁 wrote: |
大气.只觉128句似有重复之意.浅见.勿怪。 |
谢谢暗香。再思,问好。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发)
智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/ |
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kokho 进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006 Posts: 2642 Location: Singapore kokhoCollection |
Posted: 2007-05-21 09:30:12 Post subject: |
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拜读 问好。。。
。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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qxz-123456 童生
Joined: 18 May 2007 Posts: 84 Location: 内蒙赤峰 qxz-123456Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-22 04:44:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢,问好,远握。 _________________ 齐喜章(智发)
智发雅居http://qxzzzzz.blog.sohu.com/ |
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