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盲姑娘在镜子中等待剪梦手的归来
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PostPosted: 2007-05-20 10:39:46    Post subject: 盲姑娘在镜子中等待剪梦手的归来 Reply with quote

盲姑娘在镜子中等待剪梦手的归来

我安于这种静寂
像琥珀里完整的昆虫
也不乞求
也不焦灼

你会踏着命运之途
归来

时光正在侵蚀你
而你也不必害怕
我永远不会老
我为你保持鲜洁的躯体和灵魂
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PostPosted: 2007-05-20 11:51:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

这个好

是你最好的一个

沉稳之中,透出了苍凉感
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PostPosted: 2007-05-20 13:43:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首确好。情深而内敛,有力并富于哲理。进步!
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