春去来兮 童生
Joined: 25 Mar 2007 Posts: 22 Location: 哈尔滨 春去来兮Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-19 18:56:49 Post subject: 投一首 |
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[原创]无题
大地习惯于
握住一支支笔
沉吟
而天空
却早已把它
连同它无数支笔
当做了画布
写意挥洒
就象你
丹青出
我的四季风光
而你,我想
是否也是
气象万千? |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-05-19 19:02:22 Post subject: |
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精致 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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春去来兮 童生
Joined: 25 Mar 2007 Posts: 22 Location: 哈尔滨 春去来兮Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-21 14:41:33 Post subject: |
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感谢和平岛版主的点评,问好! |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-21 15:10:12 Post subject: |
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拜读,问好! _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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春去来兮 童生
Joined: 25 Mar 2007 Posts: 22 Location: 哈尔滨 春去来兮Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-23 23:09:47 Post subject: |
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感谢,问好少君版主! |
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